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Men,
       like the fingers on my left hand
       I had five of them
       spare the five on my right
it would be the same

Him,
       like the thumb, he's quite far from the others
       I look up to him
       because his music gives him wings
I thought he was the one

and him,
             like the forefinger, he always points ahead
             I look forward to him
             because his skills rob him away
I thought he was the one

another him,
                   like the middlefinger, he stands out
                   I am always looked upon
                   because his intellect makes me dumb
I thought he was the one

still another him,
                        like the ring finger, he is chained with diamonds
                        I always look out though
                        because he may be fancy inside
I thought he was the one

one more him,
                     like the small finger, he has nothing to brag
                     but I always look to him
                     because his eyes speak of difference
and I thought he was the one

but it's always been the same
I thought each of them was the one,
                                                     the one that crossed my knuckles like a ring
                                                     seeking the perfect finger
don't be defeated by notions and fears,

yeah they're just men.

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:iconlcansty:
LCAnsty Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Lovely light in this picture xxx
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sarjan Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe thanks
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:iconetheara:
etheara Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
wow! :o
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe
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warchiLd15 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2009
argghhh!!

ganda tlga!
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
^^

thanks
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:icondeizzan:
Deizzan Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008
...beautiful.
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thnk you so much^^

haha i enjoy those comments you put in my page:)

you are nice:hug:
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:iconeverydaysaint:
EverydaySaint Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Fantastic job.
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks:)
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HYDEness23 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2008
I'm hoping that you'll meet the one. TT_TT
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
T_T

i hope i will^^ XD
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:iconclownscape:
clownscape Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
If he's every finger, then is he not just another man?

Smile.
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
haha yeah he is just another man ^^
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:icondetailedillusion:
detailedillusion Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
Good unique concept, I'm impressed:)
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much:)
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:iconvergilsharky:
VergilSharky Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008   General Artist
gusto ko sya X} :heart:
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
sino?

haha :lol:

thanks for the favorite :hug:
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:iconvergilsharky:
VergilSharky Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2008   General Artist
:aww:

welcome poh :hug:
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:iconbjworks:
bjworks Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008
Wow naks naman you're really great
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
salamats BJ:)

kmusta asan ka na?

baguio pa din?
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:iconbjworks:
bjworks Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008
eto frustrated mejo ndi ok hehe.
Yup baguio pa rin pinapatuloy ang pagaaral. akap :hug:
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
why nmn frustrated?

oh gagrad ka na ba? good luck ha:hug: akap din...hehe
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:iconbjworks:
bjworks Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
Wala lang napakamalas lang lagi hehe
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
malas saan?
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:iconbjworks:
bjworks Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008
hehe ala lang hayyy
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
anong wala lang e...kaw tlga
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Flight-Of-Life Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008
great concept.
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much:)
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:iconjoan-kagami:
Joan-Kagami Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
wow... kinumpleto mo ung isang kamay
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
^^

haha!

i swear
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:iconjoan-kagami:
Joan-Kagami Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
e yung kabila?
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
next time :D
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:iconakunamaru:
akunamaru Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008
Really good poem I like it -thumbs up-
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
:thumbsup:
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:iconakunamaru:
akunamaru Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008
lol :lol:
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much:)
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:iconakunamaru:
akunamaru Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008
you're welcomezzz
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:iconcatwoman-revenge:
catwoman-revenge Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008   Photographer
wauw!
sad but pretty!
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much sugar:hug:
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:iconjanemini:
janemini Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
ang husay ^^
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
salamat sis :hug:
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:iconjanemini:
janemini Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
:thumbsup:

weird.. parang may ibang dating ung mga poem mo ang husay kahit klan :D
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe parang gusto kitang yakapin ng mahigpit na mahigpit :hug:

salamat ha^^

sana makita kita isang araw^^
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janemini Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
:worship: :hug:

aq dn^^

:thumbsup:
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Codysseus154 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing. There are very few poems submitted to DA which make me want to memorize them like this does. I can imagine it would be even more incredible if written in ruled calligraphic script since visual presentation is already a major factor, but alas, DA can't handle exotic fonts. Still, this is definitely a fave. Keep it up!
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sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much:)

hmmm i am overwhelmed, you want me to send you the orginal copy, handwritten...?
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:iconcodysseus154:
Codysseus154 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Sure, I'd like to see it.
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
that would be great^^
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