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Of Waiting And Cheating... by ~sarjan:iconsarjan:





...you're letting me go
now you don't mind me

outside your heart's room
outside your life's home

if only i came
just a bit earlier,

maybe the door is still close
so i can still knock

knowing you're waiting inside
for me to come in

but now it is open
i get it, i'm late

that no matter how much
i wanted to barge in

i just lost the right
to stand and fight

my fault, i admit
foolish me...it's my defeat.

...if only i came
just a bit earlier
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for me its not a question who came first but rather who do want to be with. i dont think you are late, i think he just dont feel the same way you do.

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Do you have to make it linger???

my club ~BirthNote
truth hurts.
indeed.

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I'M SO JEALOUS...:crying:
thank you so much:)

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I'M SO JEALOUS...:crying:
"And when the fighting is over... cuz our mouths have just run dry..."


Nakarelate sa kanta ng Urbandub...

Wala lang...nakikinig ako sa kanta nung binasa ko to...:D

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"You need him, I could be him"...
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Naa nangutana nako, naa ba kunoy mu-agi nga jeep sa CDU Reclamation campus...


Ingon ko "Naa ba kaha sa?"
It's great to see what you've done with it. i think this is the first time someone has set my image to their poetry. Thank you!
if only i came just a bit earlier...
-i love this ate. plus, i can relate.

after all, i, too am still waiting.

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Silence is the fire that speaks to us in tongues.

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i love URBANDUB! :headbang:

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I'M SO JEALOUS...:crying:
no prob...i'll keep my eye on your gallery:)

and thanks for the favorite^^

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I'M SO JEALOUS...:crying:
thank you so much sis :hug:

whom are you waiting for?

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I'M SO JEALOUS...:crying:

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