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i never saw a man
cry before me...
before

until you.

sorry.

i promise
i'll listen to you,
i'll go to sleep now

so that
we can meet
in a dream

in the heavens
we created
just for us

in the paradise
we live
to love.
for Mayank Bhaskar

he asked me
if he can change my name

he gave me
it's meaning

it means
'whom I choose to love'

I agreed.

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preview is :iconbhobie123: 's deviation entitled promise-twilight
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:iconblanzeflor:
Blanzeflor Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010
Just WOW.
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:)

your poems are superb as well:thumbsup:
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:iconmykemanila:
Mykemanila Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009  Professional General Artist
Nice to know that people _do_ believe in love.
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, you do?
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:iconmykemanila:
Mykemanila Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2009  Professional General Artist
Nice to know that people (besides me) _do_ believe in love. -hehehe-nalimutan isali sarili.

By March yun sagot sa tanong mo.:)

Thanks
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sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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:iconthemagnetichippo:
themagnetichippo Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009
ooohhh... i can feel something ><
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe what?
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:iconenskie:
Enskie Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
Beautiful poetry, truly, beautiful.
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much^^
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:iconsomething44:
something44 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
Do I hear a hint of Matchbook Romance? or that dreadful Chicosci music. LOL! This poem is cute and sweet. Simple words describing simple emotions.
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
both^^

i love both bands

just their music though^^
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:iconsomething44:
something44 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
O rly? haha. Matchbook Romance's my favorite, too bad they disbanded a couple of years ago... but I hate Chicosci with a fury. Miggy Chavez can't sing live. XD
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sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah right.

maybe it's the message of the music

like vampire social club

will you ever learn...but i'm not so into the musician :lol:

or even their being labeled as emo band...or their fashion statement

haha! i'm more into literary content...still
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:iconw0kit0ki:
w0kit0ki Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009
aaaawwwww :heart: are you in luv? :3
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
no:D
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:iconjoan-kagami:
Joan-Kagami Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
diabetis
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:lol:

honey and bees
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:iconjoan-kagami:
Joan-Kagami Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
XD grabe naman ung guy... totoo ba yan o dream mo lang
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
totoo yan

kahapon lang nangyari :D
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:iconjoan-kagami:
Joan-Kagami Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
so ano bagong pangalan mo
ahihihi
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
ehem ehem

indian name mishu
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:iconjoan-kagami:
Joan-Kagami Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
miss you X}
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
akala ko nga e

pero indian name nga xa^^

:D

with that meaning i wrote in the author's comment...

haha!

ang pangit ng name ko...pero gusto ko yung tawag saken nung ofismate ko...

seruh
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:iconvergilsharky:
VergilSharky Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009   General Artist
smells like :rose:s & :heart:s blooming :flirty:
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:D

haha

are you?
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:iconstephfaith:
stephfaith Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009
:flirty:
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe landi!
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:iconstephfaith:
stephfaith Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009
hahahaha!
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
hmmmm :lick:
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:iconstephfaith:
stephfaith Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009
:?
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
haha

maybe you are in loved
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:iconstephfaith:
stephfaith Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009
ang masakit dun, does the person love you back? =(
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
un nga un .

hahaha!
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:iconlhege:
Lhege Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009
I smell.....:love:....:D
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
smell....cheeseburger! :lol:
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:iconlhege:
Lhege Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009
ahahaha...iniiba topic oh....:nana: YEY! lilibre moko chizburger! :boogie:
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
onga db!

punta ka psicom con sa mega!
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:iconlhege:
Lhege Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
kelan yun? sana pwede c PJ nun...:D
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
sa 31, sa mega^^
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:iconfurnacefire:
FurnaceFire Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009
WOW! :wow: in love?
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
fallen out of love :D
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:iconfurnacefire:
FurnaceFire Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009
what? wadyamin? :aww: aww...:cuddle: sorry. :hug:
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha!

manhid
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:iconfurnacefire:
FurnaceFire Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
:rofl: don't buking me...I'm a poreynjer....:rofl:
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:iconsarjan:
sarjan Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:lol:

ok.

i slipped
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